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Originally posted by Storyteller I can copy paste Darek's text. Will probably be a release at some point. Need to find a couple of variations and I can probably ride this track out.... Storyteller · Detroit Vanilla (Work in Progress)

Hi all, really cool to see this thread is still going after all these years

This is great!! very cool vibe. It just needs a lead (maybe vocal samples) or a synth lead and maybe some space like delays etc IMO

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Hey guys this is a house track with OG vocals

appreciate any thoughts or mix crit

Thankyou!

C

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Originally posted by chris marsh https://hearthis.at/chris-marsh/get...3.11.21-mk2/bxR Hey guys this is a house track with OG vocals appreciate any thoughts or mix crit Thankyou! C

Nice to see you still producing Chris! As far as your production - not much of criticism with maybe exception of one area (which could be slightly improve in my view) - vocal. I wouldn't give you any specific suggestion on how to do that but I will let you know what I think could help you get there. Play with spreading this vocal slightly of the center - maybe even move them (occasionally or even some vocal fx or chops) from the left to the right with some increase reverb decay time. This whole this is about adding some excitement and movement to your vocal - just mu $0.04.

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Originally posted by chris marsh https://hearthis.at/chris-marsh/get...3.11.21-mk2/bxR Hey guys this is a house track with OG vocals appreciate any thoughts or mix crit Thankyou! C

Lovely hook at the start! Sounds nice and clean!
Is this F9 piano too like my clip? (your fault I got it in the first place - that's a good thing lol).

Vocals can be a bit louder, or hihat action a bit softer. They're competing for my attention. All in all this stuff is really good.

Very well done! Great track all in all but needs that final little touch to get all out of it.

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A little stimulations over here will help lol - My latest idea on production table - any thoughts?

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Storyteller - great stuff, really like this, super twist to house. Yeah, that piano preset is pretty similar to the one Chris is using

Chris - also very nice, liking that piano melody a lot

This is just an idea - jam

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Originally posted by Storyteller Lovely hook at the start! Sounds nice and clean! Is this F9 piano too like my clip? (your fault I got it in the first place - that's a good thing lol). Vocals can be a bit louder, or hihat action a bit softer. They're competing for my attention. All in all this stuff is really good. Very well done! Great track all in all but needs that final little touch to get all out of it.

haha! yes it is. Thanks very much for listening. Going back to the drawing board with this one to try and make it better! Cheers

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Nice to see you still producing Chris! As far as your production - not much of criticism with maybe exception of one area (which could be slightly improve in my view) - vocal. I wouldn't give you any specific suggestion on how to do that but I will let you know what I think could help you get there. Play with spreading this vocal slightly of the center - maybe even move them (occasionally or even some vocal fx or chops) from the left to the right with some increase reverb decay time. This whole this is about adding some excitement and movement to your vocal - just mu $0.04. Cheers, Darek

thanks for the points!! going to re do this one to try and get it more pro sounding

cheers!

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It was a long time ago since I was working on Trance track and probably lost some edge lol but I tried (just short WIP):

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........ back to Washington state after 26 years....... - what part of Washington State? I'm in Seattle so there is a chance lol


As far as your tracks - I really like "TEST" has some nice dynamics and energy in it. Melody is sweet and sound choices are spot on with good mixing and levels. Some addition of classic guitar sound make this track even more attractive - smooth going Phil.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 I'm in Seattle so there is a chance lol

Thanks D and no kidding? Moved back to the peninsula at Port Townsend.
I'll be your way after the New Year, I'll hit you up!

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