Hmmm
Seem like 2 different tracks in one. When the bass comes in the contrast is so strong, just too much. With the new elements after, it seems like a completely different track. I think you should focus on the second half and abandon the first one, or integrate the second part better with the first.
The first half is smooth suggesting to the listener for a calm ride, but when the bass dropes, without any anticipation that could prepare the listener, you got too much contrast. Contrast can be positive if done properly, but it's not the case.
From what I can hear you've barely used any compression, which is desirable imo.
As a whole the track doesn't grab me, but it has potential. You should integrate better the various parts.
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