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Fuxzz
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2007
Location: Sweden
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quote: | Originally posted by TranceElevation
It has potential, but there are some objective errors which could massively improve it. As a start I'd lower that sort of a bass an octave down. And remove that low layer you got going on. |
I should probably have lowered that bass in a earlier stage. It sounded better in a way, but it would be a lot of work to make it fit now. Thanks for your suggestion though, will take that with me. If you have anything more on your mind, objective or not, I would appreciate to hear about it.
quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'd say call it a day, you've given your best shot, spent a lot of time on it, time to move on. I like the way you use only a few elements at once but I would just suggest you make them more interesting - listen to some up to date trap for ideas of leads etc.
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Thanks, you are right. I will leave it as it is. Some of the sounds are pretty bad, cant argue with that. Hopefully I can present something better in the future.
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Sep-22-2015 12:23
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Fuxzz
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2007
Location: Sweden
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quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's one I will probably send out, what would you change?
Is the bass taking up too much room? Drop 1 a bit lack lustre?
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For starter, the glitching seems off, sounds too mechanical. I would look at that.
And at the start, you have som nasty click going on at the off beat percussion. Other then that the beat is nice.
Im not sure about the sound coming in at 1:23, it doesnt really fit in my opinion. For me, something else would take it's place, maybe a dark vocal sample? I like the drop however.
The second break is good, but again, the same sound as in the first break annoys me. Right at the transition into the break it sounds cool though.
And again, at the end of the track, the glitching, not very tight.
I like the bass, but I think that there are others here that can give you a more reliable opinion about wether it's too big or not.
It got potential if you get it right.
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Sep-22-2015 12:55
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