okay this is done, thanks tyler for saying how repetitive the middle part was, the changes I made ended up being my favorite part of the track
Oct-13-2013 17:06
evo8
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quote:
Originally posted by meriter
okay this is done, thanks tyler for saying how repetitive the middle part was, the changes I made ended up being my favorite part of the track
I want to like this but just cant get into the groove of it, sorry!
Originally posted by evo8
I want to like this but just cant get into the groove of it, sorry!
you dont have to apologize, what I do isnt for everyone
Oct-13-2013 17:14
Tyler James
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Registered: Oct 2013
Location: Seattle, USA
quote:
Originally posted by meriter
okay this is done, thanks tyler for saying how repetitive the middle part was, the changes I made ended up being my favorite part of the track
Hey, no problem. It sounds a lot more professional! Good job! (It's better than anything I can do!)
Oct-13-2013 20:06
Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
quote:
Originally posted by meriter
okay this is done, thanks tyler for saying how repetitive the middle part was, the changes I made ended up being my favorite part of the track
Yup my favourite part to, the changes take nit a lot further.
Oct-13-2013 22:09
Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
MSZ - I'm only listening on pc speakers but it's translating very well. Seriously grown up and chunky dance music there.
In the meantime I've taken that delicious riff Bluff Monkey made for Massive and come up with this so far;
Oct-13-2013 22:16
Tyler James
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Registered: Oct 2013
Location: Seattle, USA
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
MSZ - I'm only listening on pc speakers but it's translating very well. Seriously grown up and chunky dance music there.
In the meantime I've taken that delicious riff Bluff Monkey made for Massive and come up with this so far;
I really like the vocals at about 1:30, but maybe cut back on the delay just a little. And maybe at 2:06 you could make the synth gradually come in, instead of it being instant. You know? AND the change at about 2:40 is slightly awkward.... Those are just little nit pickings I guess. I still love the vibe and everything, especially the vocals. (Another track better than anything I will ever make!)
Oct-14-2013 00:22
Tyler James
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Registered: Oct 2013
Location: Seattle, USA
Tell me, what's wrong with it?
Oct-14-2013 03:32
Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
quote:
Originally posted by Tyler James
Tell me, what's wrong with it?
Liking the piano melody and sound, and the echo is good.
Nothing wrong with the rest (apart from that Dracula sample!!).
If you wanted to improve the track I'd say make more original esoteric drums to tie in with the whole ambient feel, otherwise it's a bit like you stuck a loop over it and vary the drums quite a lot so they don't become static.
I know nothing about ambient so I am not the best to feedback here.
Oct-14-2013 10:17
Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
quote:
Originally posted by evo8
trying to keep it dark and heavy what do yous think? Too muddy? not grooving enough??
Great sounds and sound quality again, just the type of dark techno I like. Very good tension underpinned by a classy groove. Like the kick as it has an organic feel to it. I don't know if you add room verb to your sounds but if you do it works well and gives a nice personality stamp.